From 73068755ce1aad0605e717888f8093a0f0672e17 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jc_gargma <jc_gargma@iserlohn-fortress.net>
Date: Tue, 27 Aug 2024 10:31:29 -0700
Subject: Clean up some magazine descriptions.

---
 json/items/magazine/9mm.json | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'json/items/magazine/9mm.json')

diff --git a/json/items/magazine/9mm.json b/json/items/magazine/9mm.json
index d62ed35..609585f 100644
--- a/json/items/magazine/9mm.json
+++ b/json/items/magazine/9mm.json
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
     "looks_like": "glock17_17",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K USP 9x19mm 15-round magazine" },
-    "description": "A factory specification 15-round box magazine for use with the dependable Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
+    "description": "A standard 15-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
     "weight": "75 g",
     "volume": "250 ml",
     "price": 3850,
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
     "copy-from": "usp9mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K USP 9x19mm 10-round magazine" },
-    "description": "A 10-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol, physically of the same size as a 15-round magazine.  It's made to comply with laws that limit maximum magazine capacity for firearms in some states.",
+    "description": "A reduced-capacity 10-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol, physically of the same size as a 15-round magazine.  It is made to comply with laws that limit maximum magazine capacity for firearms in some states.",
     "price_postapoc": 80,
     "capacity": 10
   },
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
     "copy-from": "usp9mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K USP 9x19mm 18-round magazine" },
-    "description": "An extended 18-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
+    "description": "An expanded 18-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
     "weight": "90 g",
     "volume": "270 ml",
     "price": 4000,
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     "copy-from": "usp9mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K USP 9x19mm 20-round magazine" },
-    "description": "An extended 20-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
+    "description": "An expanded 20-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch USP 9x19mm pistol.",
     "weight": "98 g",
     "volume": "280 ml",
     "price": 4200,
@@ -66,15 +66,15 @@
     "id": "p309mag",
     "copy-from": "usp9mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
-    "name": { "str": "H&K P30 9mm 15-round magazine" },
-    "description": "A factory specification 15-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch P30 9mm handgun."
+    "name": { "str": "H&K P30 9x19mm 15-round magazine" },
+    "description": "A standard 15-round box magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch P30 9x19mm pistol."
   },
   {
     "id": "mp5mag",
     "//": "Tileset whitelist for SMG magazines",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K MP5 30-round magazine" },
-    "description": "A standard capacity curved magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
+    "description": "A standard 30-round curved magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
     "weight": "210 g",
     "volume": "500 ml",
     "price": 4100,
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
     "copy-from": "mp5mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K MP5 50-round drum magazine" },
-    "description": "A drum magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.  Much greater capacity, but less reliable than the factory specification magazine.",
+    "description": "A 50-round drum magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
     "weight": "350 g",
     "volume": "750 ml",
     "price": 6920,
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
     "copy-from": "mp5mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K MP5 40-round magazine" },
-    "description": "An extended-capacity 40-round magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
+    "description": "An expanded-capacity 40-round curved magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
     "weight": "280 g",
     "volume": "667 ml",
     "price": 4550,
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
     "copy-from": "mp5mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K MP5 38-round magazine" },
-    "description": "An extended-capacity 38-round magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
+    "description": "An expanded-capacity 38-round magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
     "weight": "266 g",
     "volume": "633 ml",
     "price": 4500,
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
     "copy-from": "mp5mag",
     "type": "MAGAZINE",
     "name": { "str": "H&K MP5 10-round magazine" },
-    "description": "A compact 10-round magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
+    "description": "A very compact 10-round magazine for use with the Heckler & Koch MP5 SMG.",
     "weight": "64 g",
     "volume": "86 ml",
     "price": 2500,
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