From 3e37ae60629c5cfe696909605186f962978a1562 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jc_gargma <jc_gargma@iserlohn-fortress.net>
Date: Thu, 15 Jul 2021 07:35:37 -0700
Subject: Clean up martial art punctuation. Update readme.

---
 README.md       |  5 +++--
 techniques.json | 12 ++++++------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 73a8a56..0b17a54 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
 
 This is a heavily modified version of the translated Battle Maid Redux mod.
 I didn't like the erotic aspects of the mod, so I removed them.
+Updated based on GoatGod's changes, discarding those changes I dislike.
 All references to master have been replaced with mistress.
 Catgirl Maid fixed to use proper cat vision.
 I also added many items from the Kawaii Maid Mod.
 Added maid gloves.
-Converted garter belt to accessory to ease wearing it with panties.
-Updated for 0.E.2
+Converted garter belt to an accessory so it can be worn alongside panties without an extra 2 encumbrance.
+Updated for Bright Nights 2021-07-14-0558
 Various rebalances.
 
 
diff --git a/techniques.json b/techniques.json
index 764e5c2..dc99ab0 100644
--- a/techniques.json
+++ b/techniques.json
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     "crit_ok": true,
     "downed_target": true,
     "req_buffs": [ "maid_pause_bonus" ],
-    "messages": [ "You strike %s with an elegant coup de grâce", "<npcname> strikes %s in one elegant motion" ],
+    "messages": [ "You strike %s with an elegant coup de grâce.", "<npcname> strikes %s in one elegant motion." ],
     "mult_bonuses": [
       { "stat": "movecost", "scale": 1.5 },
       { "stat": "damage", "type": "bash", "scale": 2.0 },
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     "block_counter": true,
     "melee_allowed": true,
     "knockback_dist": 1,
-    "messages": [ "You block %s's attack and shove them back.", "<npcname> struggles and forces %s back" ],
+    "messages": [ "You block %s's attack and shove them back.", "<npcname> parries and forces %s back." ],
     "mult_bonuses": [
       { "stat": "movecost", "scale": 0.0 },
       { "stat": "damage", "type": "bash", "scale": 0.25 },
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     "dodge_counter": true,
     "melee_allowed": true,
     "down_dur": 1,
-    "messages": [ "You whirl away and trip %s", "<npcname> strikes with a malice that surprises you" ],
+    "messages": [ "You whirl away and trip %s.", "<npcname> dodges and trips %s." ],
     "mult_bonuses": [
       { "stat": "movecost", "scale": 0.0 },
       { "stat": "damage", "type": "bash", "scale": 0.50 },
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
     "melee_allowed": true,
     "req_buffs": [ "maid_pause_bonus" ],
     "stun_dur": 1,
-    "messages": [ "Your carefully placed strike sunders %s's guard", "<npcname> lands a measured strike on %s" ],
+    "messages": [ "Your carefully placed strike sunders %s's guard.", "<npcname> lands a measured strike on %s." ],
     "mult_bonuses": [
       { "stat": "damage", "type": "bash", "scale": 1.33 },
       { "stat": "damage", "type": "cut", "scale": 1.33 },
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
     "down_dur": 2,
     "melee_allowed": true,
     "knockback_dist": 1,
-    "messages": [ "You assault %s with fury and dedication", "<npcname> assaults %s with fury and dedication" ],
+    "messages": [ "You assault %s with fury and dedication.", "<npcname> assaults %s with fury and dedication." ],
     "flat_bonuses": [
       { "stat": "arpen", "type": "bash", "scale": 5 },
       { "stat": "arpen", "type": "cut", "scale": 5 },
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     "type": "technique",
     "id": "tec_maid_grab",
     "name": "Evasive Movement",
-    "messages": [ "You dodge %s's grab attempt.", "The %s tries to grab <npcname>, but they slip away!" ],
+    "messages": [ "You dodge %s's grab attempt.", "The %s tries to grab <npcname>, but <npcname> slipped away!" ],
     "skill_requirements": [ { "name": "melee", "level": 1 } ],
     "melee_allowed": true,
     "defensive": true,
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