Update ammo descriptions to more recent dda.

Fix incorrect damage on 357mag and 357sig.
Fix 36 paper not being marked as reloaded.
Fix 38 super not being a 38 super round.

16 files changed, 78 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/json/items/ammo/10mm.json b/json/items/ammo/10mm.json
index 26b4dd4..7c9c3da 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/10mm.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/10mm.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "10mm_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "10mm Auto FMJ" },
-    "description": "Jacketed 10mm Auto ammunition with 180gr bullets.  The 10mm Auto cartridge is a rather powerful handgun round and the progenitor to the more popular .40 S&W.",
+    "description": "Jacketed 10mm Auto ammunition with a 180gr bullet.  The 10mm Auto cartridge is a rather powerful handgun round and the progenitor to the more popular .40 S&W.",
     "weight": "9 g",
     "volume": "117 ml",
     "price": 400,
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "10mm_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "10mm Auto FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Jacketed 10mm Auto ammunition with a 180gr bullet.  The 10mm Auto cartridge is a rather powerful handgun round and the progenitor to the more popular .40 S&W.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -36,6 +37,7 @@
     "copy-from": "10mm_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "10mm Auto FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "Jacketed 10mm Auto ammunition with a 180gr bullet.  The 10mm Auto cartridge is a rather powerful handgun round and the progenitor to the more popular .40 S&W.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/22.json b/json/items/ammo/22.json
index 23d6c2c..fb840b6 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/22.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/22.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "22_lr",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 LR" },
-    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with 40gr unjacketed bullets.  The .22LR round is extremely weak with very low stopping power, short range, and negligible recoil.  It is most useful for rifle training, and hunting small animals.",
+    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with a 40gr unjacketed bullet.  The .22LR round is extremely weak, with short range and negligible recoil.  It is most useful for target practice and hunting small animals.",
     "weight": "3 g",
     "volume": "65 ml",
     "price": 150,
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     "copy-from": "22_cphp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 rat-shot" },
-    "description": "A .22 caliber cartridge loaded with very small pieces of shot contained within a fragmenting plastic capsule.  It has an extremely short range and penetration ability, but it can hit targets with greater ease.",
+    "description": "A .22 caliber cartridge loaded with very small pieces of shot contained within a fragmenting plastic capsule.  It has an extremely short range and poor penetration ability, but the spread of shot can hit targets with greater ease.",
     "count": 100,
     "price_postapoc": 400,
     "dispersion": 0,
@@ -57,6 +57,7 @@
     "copy-from": "22_lr",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 LR, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with a 40gr unjacketed bullet.  The .22LR round is extremely weak, with short range and negligible recoil.  It is most useful for target practice and hunting small animals.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -66,6 +67,7 @@
     "copy-from": "22_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with a 30gr FMJ bullet.  The .22LR round is extremely weak, with short range and negligible recoil.  This type is marginally better at piercing through targets, but deals even less damage as a result.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -75,6 +77,7 @@
     "copy-from": "22_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 LR FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with a 30gr FMJ bullet.  The .22LR round is extremely weak, with short range and negligible recoil.  This type is marginally better at piercing through targets, but deals even less damage as a result.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.57, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -89,6 +92,7 @@
     "copy-from": "22_lr",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".22 LR, black powder" },
+    "description": ".22 Long Rifle ammunition with a 40gr unjacketed bullet.  The .22LR round is extremely weak, with short range and negligible recoil.  It is most useful for target practice and hunting small animals.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.57, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/32.json b/json/items/ammo/32.json
index f6b9695..c8b1f5d 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/32.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/32.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "32_acp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".32 ACP" },
-    "description": "The .32 ACP was a popular handgun cartridge in the 20th century.  Not so powerful as the .38 or the 9x19mm though.",
+    "description": "A .32 ACP round, once a popular handgun cartridge in the 20th century.  It lacks power compared to the .38 and the 9x19mm.",
     "weight": "5 g",
     "volume": "116 ml",
     "price": 160,
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "32_acp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".32 ACP, reloaded" },
+    "description": "A .32 ACP round, once a popular handgun cartridge in the 20th century.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -36,6 +37,7 @@
     "copy-from": "32_acp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".32 ACP, black powder" },
+    "description": "A .32 ACP round, once a popular handgun cartridge in the 20th century.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/357mag.json b/json/items/ammo/357mag.json
index f8a3380..a06ca7e 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/357mag.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/357mag.json
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     "ammo_type": "357mag",
     "casing": "357mag_casing",
     "range": 16,
-    "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 28, "armor_penetration": 4 },
+    "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 33, "armor_penetration": 4 },
     "dispersion": 30,
     "recoil": 700,
     "effects": [ "COOKOFF" ]
@@ -35,6 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357mag_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 Magnum FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Jacketed .357 Magnum ammunition.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1, "recoil": 0.9 }
   },
   {
@@ -42,6 +43,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357mag_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 Magnum JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Jacketed hollow point .357 Magnum ammunition.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1, "recoil": 0.9 }
   },
   {
@@ -49,6 +51,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357mag_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 Magnum FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "Jacketed .357 Magnum ammunition.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -63,6 +66,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357mag_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 Magnum JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": "Jacketed hollow point .357 Magnum ammunition.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/357sig.json b/json/items/ammo/357sig.json
index 1057af6..21c4150 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/357sig.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/357sig.json
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     "ammo_type": "357sig",
     "casing": "357sig_casing",
     "range": 16,
-    "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 28, "armor_penetration": 4 },
+    "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 29, "armor_penetration": 4 },
     "dispersion": 30,
     "recoil": 600,
     "effects": [ "COOKOFF" ]
@@ -35,6 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357sig_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 SIG FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Jacketed .357 SIG ammunition.  The .357 SIG round is a high velocity pistol cartridge, giving it a flatter trajectory than many handgun rounds.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -44,6 +45,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357sig_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 SIG JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Jacketed hollow point .357 SIG ammunition.  The .357 SIG round is a high velocity pistol cartridge, giving it a flatter trajectory than many handgun rounds.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -53,6 +55,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357sig_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 SIG FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "Jacketed .357 SIG ammunition.  The .357 SIG round is a high velocity pistol cartridge, giving it a flatter trajectory than many handgun rounds.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -67,6 +70,7 @@
     "copy-from": "357sig_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".357 SIG JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": "Jacketed hollow point .357 SIG ammunition.  The .357 SIG round is a high velocity pistol cartridge, giving it a flatter trajectory than many handgun rounds.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/36paper.json b/json/items/ammo/36paper.json
index d944483..ad3af20 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/36paper.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/36paper.json
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@
     "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 19 },
     "dispersion": 80,
     "recoil": 210,
-    "effects": [ "COOKOFF", "MUZZLE_SMOKE", "BLACKPOWDER" ]
+    "effects": [ "COOKOFF", "RECYCLED", "MUZZLE_SMOKE", "BLACKPOWDER" ]
   }
 ]
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/38.json b/json/items/ammo/38.json
index a5d304c..6033cab 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/38.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/38.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "38_special",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str": ".38 Special" },
-    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with 130gr FMJ bullets.  The .38 Special round was extremely common among US police forces during the 20th century.",
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a 130gr FMJ bullet.  The .38 Special round was extremely common among US police forces during the 20th century.",
     "weight": "8 g",
     "volume": "113 ml",
     "price": 210,
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_special",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 FMJ" },
-    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with brass jacketed 130gr bullets.  The .38 Special round has been known from its inception for its accuracy and low recoil.",
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a brass jacketed 130gr bullet.  From its inception, the .38 Special round has been known for its accuracy and low recoil.",
     "relative": { "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": -2, "armor_penetration": 4 } }
   },
   {
@@ -35,11 +35,12 @@
     "copy-from": "38_special",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Super" },
-    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with 90gr JHP bullets.  Designed in 1929, the .38 super cartridge was designed to penetrate body armor and vehicles.",
+    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with a 90gr JHP bullet.  Designed in 1929, the .38 super cartridge was designed to penetrate body armor and vehicles.",
     "price": 240,
     "price_postapoc": 600,
     "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ],
     "count": 20,
+    "ammo_type": "38super",
     "relative": { "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 5, "armor_penetration": 4 }, "dispersion": -10 },
     "proportional": { "recoil": 1.5 }
   },
@@ -48,6 +49,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a brass jacketed 130gr bullet.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -57,6 +59,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_special",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Special, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a 130gr FMJ bullet.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -66,6 +69,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_super",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Super, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with a 90gr JHP bullet.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -75,6 +79,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a brass jacketed 130gr bullet.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -89,6 +94,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38_special",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Special, black powder" },
+    "description": ".38 Special ammunition with a 130gr FMJ bullet.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/380.json b/json/items/ammo/380.json
index beeda93..d982199 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/380.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/380.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "380_FMJ",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP FMJ" },
-    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a brass jacketed 95gr bullet.  Popular in pocket pistols for over a century, it is often considered the weakest caliber to consider carrying.  One should be careful not to chamber it in 9x18mm Makarov or 9x19mm firearms.",
+    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a brass jacketed 95gr bullet.  Popular in pocket pistols for over a century, it is often considered the weakest caliber to consider for self-defense.  One should be careful not to chamber it in 9x18mm Makarov or 9x19mm firearms.",
     "weight": "6 g",
     "volume": "89 ml",
     "price": 140,
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_FMJ",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP +P" },
-    "description": "Overpressure .380 ACP ammunition with a 90gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  These defensive loadings are designed to maximize performance and tend to be more accurate than practice ammo.  One should be careful not to chamber it in 9x18mm Makarov or 9x19mm firearms.",
+    "description": "Overpressure .380 ACP ammunition with a 90gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  This defensive loading is designed to maximize performance, and tends to be more accurate than practice ammo.  One should be careful not to chamber it in 9x18mm Makarov or 9x19mm firearms.",
     "price": 190,
     "price_postapoc": 1500,
     "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ],
@@ -48,6 +48,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_FMJ",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a brass jacketed 95gr bullet.  Popular in pocket pistols for over a century, it is often considered the weakest caliber to consider for self-defense.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -57,6 +58,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_JHP",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a 95gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  It is a popular round for small concealable backup pistols, and often the weakest recommended defensive caliber.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -66,6 +68,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_p",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP +P, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Overpressure .380 ACP ammunition with a 90gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  This defensive loading is designed to maximize performance, and tends to be more accurate than practice ammo.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -75,6 +78,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_FMJ",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a brass jacketed 95gr bullet.  Popular in pocket pistols for over a century, it is often considered the weakest caliber to consider for self-defense.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -89,6 +93,7 @@
     "copy-from": "380_JHP",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".380 ACP JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": ".380 ACP ammunition with a 95gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  It is a popular round for small concealable backup pistols, and often the weakest recommended defensive caliber.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/38super.json b/json/items/ammo/38super.json
index a8057e7..4ede00b 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/38super.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/38super.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "38super_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Super FMJ" },
-    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with 147gr FMJ bullets.  The .38 Super round was developed from .38 ACP in the 1920s, designed to penetrate the body armor of the era.",
+    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with a 147gr FMJ bullet.  The .38 Super round was developed from .38 ACP in the 1920s, designed to penetrate the body armor of the era.",
     "weight": "8 g",
     "volume": "97 ml",
     "price": 210,
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "38super_fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".38 Super FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".38 Super ammunition with a 147gr FMJ bullet.  The .38 Super round was developed from .38 ACP in the 1920s, designed to penetrate the body armor of the era.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/40.json b/json/items/ammo/40.json
index 8724373..0018673 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/40.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/40.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "40sw",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".40 S&W JHP" },
-    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with 135gr JHP bullets.  The .40 S&W round is a descended from the 10mm Auto cartridge and maintains most of its predecessor's strengths while reducing recoil.",
+    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with a 135gr JHP bullet.  The .40 S&W round is descended from the 10mm Auto cartridge and maintains most of its predecessor's strengths while reducing recoil.",
     "weight": "9 g",
     "volume": "106 ml",
     "price": 220,
@@ -35,6 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "40fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".40 S&W FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with a 180gr FMJ bullet.  Designed to retain the 10mm Auto cartridge's power with lower recoil, the .40 S&W round became popular for law enforcement and personal defense.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -44,6 +45,7 @@
     "copy-from": "40sw",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".40 S&W JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with a 135gr JHP bullet.  The .40 S&W round is descended from the 10mm Auto cartridge and maintains most of its predecessor's strengths while reducing recoil.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -53,6 +55,7 @@
     "copy-from": "40fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".40 S&W FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with a 180gr FMJ bullet.  Designed to retain the 10mm Auto cartridge's power with lower recoil, the .40 S&W round became popular for law enforcement and personal defense.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -67,6 +70,7 @@
     "copy-from": "40sw",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".40 S&W JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": ".40 S&W ammunition with a 135gr JHP bullet.  The .40 S&W round is descended from the 10mm Auto cartridge and maintains most of its predecessor's strengths while reducing recoil.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/44.json b/json/items/ammo/44.json
index 77ad8b0..93a0d16 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/44.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/44.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "44magnum",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str": ".44 Magnum" },
-    "description": ".44 Magnum ammunition with 240gr JHP bullets.  The .44 Magnum round is one of the most powerful handgun cartridges available.  It has excellent stopping power but suffers from extremely high recoil for a handgun round.",
+    "description": ".44 Magnum ammunition with a 240gr JHP bullet.  The .44 Magnum round is one of the most powerful handgun cartridges available.  It has excellent stopping power but suffers from extremely high recoil for a handgun round.",
     "weight": "13 g",
     "volume": "87 ml",
     "price": 175,
@@ -35,6 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "44magnum",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".44 Magnum, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".44 Magnum ammunition with a 240gr JHP bullet.  The .44 Magnum round is one of the most powerful handgun cartridges available.  It has excellent stopping power but suffers from extremely high recoil for a handgun round.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -44,6 +45,7 @@
     "copy-from": "44fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".44 Magnum FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "A brass-jacketed variant of the .44 Magnum round.  This increases penetration slightly at the cost of reduced damage from expansion.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -53,6 +55,7 @@
     "copy-from": "44magnum",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".44 Magnum, black powder" },
+    "description": ".44 Magnum ammunition with a 240gr JHP bullet.  The .44 Magnum round is one of the most powerful handgun cartridges available.  It has excellent stopping power but suffers from extremely high recoil for a handgun round.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -67,6 +70,7 @@
     "copy-from": "44fmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".44 Magnum FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "A brass-jacketed variant of the .44 Magnum round.  This increases penetration slightly at the cost of reduced damage from expansion.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/45.json b/json/items/ammo/45.json
index 0245b8f..0886ae2 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/45.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/45.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "45_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP JHP" },
-    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with 185gr JHP bullets.  The .45 ACP round was developed to replace the .38 Long Colt cartridge in the early 20th century.  It has good stopping power but above average recoil.",
+    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with a 185gr JHP bullet.  The .45 ACP round was developed to replace the .38 Long Colt cartridge in the early 20th century, but has since lost some of its popularity to more modern handgun ammo.",
     "weight": "10 g",
     "volume": "112 ml",
     "price": 180,
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP +P" },
-    "description": "Overpressure .45 ACP ammunition with 185gr JHP bullets.  This +P ammunition has higher muzzle energy than typical loads leading to greater damage, accuracy and recoil.",
+    "description": "Overpressure .45 ACP ammunition with a 185gr JHP bullet.  This cartridge has higher muzzle energy than typical loads, leading to greater damage, accuracy and recoil.",
     "price": 210,
     "price_postapoc": 600,
     "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ],
@@ -47,6 +47,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_acp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with a 230gr FMJ bullet.  Due to a reputation for effectiveness, the .45 ACP round has been common for over a century.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -56,6 +57,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with a 185gr JHP bullet.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -65,6 +67,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_super",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP +P, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Overpressure .45 ACP ammunition with a 185gr JHP bullet.  This +P ammunition has higher muzzle energy than typical loads, leading to greater damage, accuracy and recoil.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -74,6 +77,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_acp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with a 230gr FMJ bullet.  Due to a reputation for effectiveness, the .45 ACP round has been common for over a century.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -88,6 +92,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 ACP JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": ".45 ACP ammunition with a 185gr JHP bullet.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/45colt.json b/json/items/ammo/45colt.json
index 5a0fc65..b96ebfb 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/45colt.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/45colt.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "45colt_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 Colt JHP" },
-    "description": ".45 Colt ammunition with 250gr jacketed hollow point bullets.  Originally designed for the Colt Single Action Army, and still used for modern reproduction revolvers.  Originally a black powder cartridge, modern loads can make this round competitive in the new era.",
+    "description": ".45 Colt ammunition with a 250gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  Originally designed for the Colt Single Action Army, and still used for modern reproduction revolvers.  Originally a black powder cartridge, modern loads can make this round competitive in the new era.",
     "weight": "12 g",
     "volume": "190 ml",
     "price": 200,
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45colt_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 Colt JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": ".45 Colt ammunition with a 250gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  Originally designed for the Colt Single Action Army, and still used for modern reproduction revolvers.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -36,6 +37,7 @@
     "copy-from": "45colt_jhp",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": ".45 Colt JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": ".45 Colt ammunition with a 250gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  Originally designed for the Colt Single Action Army, and still used for modern reproduction revolvers.  The resource scarcity of the Cataclysm inspired someone to hand-reload this one with black powder, bringing the round closer to its original incarnation.  It's kind of poetic, when you think about it.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/762x25.json b/json/items/ammo/762x25.json
index 8f55b8b..6a5f2f9 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/762x25.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/762x25.json
@@ -52,6 +52,7 @@
     "copy-from": "762_25hot",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "7.62x25mm FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "A high-pressure commercial version of the 7.62x25mm cartridge, loaded with an 85 gr. FMJ bullet.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9, "armor_penetration": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 }
   },
   {
@@ -60,6 +61,7 @@
     "copy-from": "762_25hot",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "7.62x25mm FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "A high-pressure commercial version of the 7.62x25mm cartridge, loaded with an 85 gr. FMJ bullet.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/9mm.json b/json/items/ammo/9mm.json
index 7f92f9b..80c5a91 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/9mm.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/9mm.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "9mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm JHP" },
-    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a 116gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  JHP rounds have inferior penetration to FMJ rounds but their expansion slightly increases stopping power against unarmored targets and reduces overpenetration.",
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a 116gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  JHP rounds have inferior penetration to FMJ rounds, but their expansion slightly increases stopping power against unarmored targets and reduces overpenetration.",
     "weight": "7 g",
     "volume": "115 ml",
     "price": 150,
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm FMJ" },
-    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a brass jacketed 115gr bullet.  It is a popular round for military, law enforcement, and civilian use for over a century.",
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a brass jacketed 115gr bullet.  It has been a popular round for military, law enforcement, and civilian use for over a century.",
     "relative": { "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": -2, "armor_penetration": 4 } }
   },
   {
@@ -61,6 +61,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm JHP, reloaded" },
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a 116gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  JHP rounds have inferior penetration to FMJ rounds, but their expansion slightly increases stopping power against unarmored targets and reduces overpenetration.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -70,6 +71,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mmfmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm FMJ, reloaded" },
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a brass jacketed 115gr bullet.  It has been a popular round for military, law enforcement, and civilian use for over a century.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -79,6 +81,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mmP",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm +P, reloaded" },
+    "description": "Overpressure 9x19mm ammunition.  The round's increased velocity results in superior accuracy and stopping power at the cost of higher recoil.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -88,6 +91,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mmP2",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm +P+, reloaded" },
+    "description": "A step beyond the high-pressure 9x19mm +P round, the +P+ has even higher internal pressure offering superior damage, accuracy, and penetration.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -97,6 +101,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm JHP, black powder" },
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a 116gr jacketed hollow point bullet.  JHP rounds have inferior penetration to FMJ rounds, but their expansion slightly increases stopping power against unarmored targets and reduces overpenetration.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -111,6 +116,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9mmfmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x19mm FMJ, black powder" },
+    "description": "9x19mm ammunition with a brass jacketed 115gr bullet.  It has been a popular round for military, law enforcement, and civilian use for over a century.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
diff --git a/json/items/ammo/9x18.json b/json/items/ammo/9x18.json
index aefd8bf..bb28127 100644
--- a/json/items/ammo/9x18.json
+++ b/json/items/ammo/9x18.json
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     "id": "9x18mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm 57-N-181S" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with 93gr steel core FMJ bullets.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with a 93gr steel core FMJ bullet.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century, and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.",
     "weight": "8 g",
     "volume": "97 ml",
     "price": 100,
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm RG028" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round uses bullets with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round uses a bullet with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration.",
     "price": 200,
     "price_postapoc": 3100,
     "relative": { "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": -2, "armor_penetration": 8 } }
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm 57-N-181S, reloaded" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with 93gr lead core FMJ bullets.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with a 93gr steel core FMJ bullet.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century, and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -60,6 +60,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mmP2",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm SP-7, reloaded" },
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov SP-7 ammunition.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
     "delete": { "effects": [ "NEVER_MISFIRES" ], "flags": [ "IRREPLACEABLE_CONSUMABLE" ] }
@@ -69,7 +70,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mmfmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm RG028, reloaded" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round normally uses bullets with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration, but this knockoff uses a lead core instead.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round uses a bullet with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration.  This one has been hand-reloaded by a survivor or perhaps a pre-Cataclysm hobbyist, leading to slightly inferior performance compared to factory-produced ammo.",
     "proportional": { "price": 0.7, "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.9 }, "dispersion": 1.1 },
     "relative": { "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0, "armor_penetration": -4 } },
     "extend": { "effects": [ "RECYCLED" ] },
@@ -80,7 +81,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mm",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm 57-N-181S, black powder" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with 93gr lead core FMJ bullets.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov ammunition with a 93gr steel core FMJ bullet.  The 9x18mm round was very common in the Eastern Bloc during the 20th century, and remained in Russian military service into the 21st century.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },
@@ -95,7 +96,7 @@
     "copy-from": "9x18mmfmj",
     "type": "AMMO",
     "name": { "str_sp": "9x18mm RG028, black powder" },
-    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round normally uses bullets with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration, but this knockoff uses a lead core instead.",
+    "description": "9x18mm Makarov RG028 ammunition.  The RG028 round uses a bullet with a hardened steel core to improve armor penetration.  Someone was down on their luck when they hand-reloaded this one - it's filled with black powder instead of smokeless powder.",
     "proportional": {
       "price": 0.3,
       "damage": { "damage_type": "bullet", "amount": 0.76, "armor_penetration": 0.5 },