Clean up mission text further

1 files changed, 23 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
index 0cb9d36..5a20054 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
     "//": "Subgoals that you may want to complete or to keep you in the bay for moments.",
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest1",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Collect 30 blood",
-    "description": "Collect 7.5 L of <color_light_red>human blood</color> then bring it to the commando.",
+    "name": "Collect blood",
+    "description": "Collect 7.5 L of <color_light_red>human blood</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 0,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Collect 15 small leech teeth",
-    "description": "Gather 15 <color_light_red>small leech teeth</color> and give them to the commando.",
+    "name": "Collect small leech teeth",
+    "description": "Gather 15 <color_light_red>small leech teeth</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 200000,
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest3",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Take the blood sac from the giant \"Thing\"",
-    "description": "Slay the <color_magenta>giant \"Thing\"</color>, then deliver the <color_light_red>blood sac</color> to the commando.",
+    "name": "Slay the \"Thing\"",
+    "description": "Slay the <color_magenta>giant \"Thing\"</color>, then deliver the <color_light_red>blood sac</color> to the commando as proof.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 10,
     "value": 300000,
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
     "origins": [ "ORIGIN_SECONDARY" ],
     "has_generic_rewards": false,
     "dialogue": {
-      "describe": "This is pretty much risky to you... Going to do it?",
+      "describe": "This will be pretty risky for you... Are you still going to do it?",
       "offer": "There is a peculiar cave with vast blood residue in it and I think its their gathering place. This giant \"thing\" on the depths, you'll need to bring it down as my command.",
       "accepted": "Bring its blood sac, that would be a nice prize taking it down and as a proof of succeeding this test.",
       "rejected": "Gather your courage first.",
@@ -82,8 +82,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest4",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Kill 200 zombies",
-    "description": "Kill <color_light_red>200 zombies</color> then talk to the commando after completion.",
+    "name": "Kill zombies",
+    "description": "Kill 200 <color_light_red>zombies</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER_SPEC",
     "difficulty": 5,
     "value": 400000,
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest1",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Collect 15 blood",
-    "description": "Gather <color_light_red>15 human blood</color> then bring it to the vampire.",
+    "name": "Collect blood",
+    "description": "Gather 3.75 L <color_light_red>human blood</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 0,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -131,8 +131,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Take down 10 elder zombies",
-    "description": "Slay <color_magenta>10 elder zombies</color> then talk to the vampire after completion.",
+    "name": "Take down elder zombies",
+    "description": "Slay 10 <color_magenta>elder zombies</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER_SPEC",
     "difficulty": 3,
     "value": 300000,
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest3",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Bring a bloodrune",
-    "description": "Obtain a <color_light_red>bloodrune</color> then deliver it to the vampire.",
+    "description": "Obtain a <color_light_red>bloodrune</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 5,
     "value": 400000,
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest4",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Take Vampire to the Cove",
-    "description": "Escort the vampire to the <color_light_blue>vampire cove</color>.",
+    "description": "Escort the vampire to the <color_light_blue>Vampire Cove</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_GO_TO_TYPE",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 500000,
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERTRADER_quest",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Kill the Infected Vampires",
-    "description": "Kill the <color_magenta>infected vampires</color>, then return their <color_light_red>corrupted bloodrune stones</color> to the trader.",
+    "description": "Kill the <color_magenta>infected vampires</color>, then return their <color_light_red>corrupted bloodrune stones</color> to the trader as proof.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 3,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -248,8 +248,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERTRADER_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Slay 10 bats",
-    "description": "Kill 10 <color_magenta>vampire bats</color>, then talk to the trader after completion.",
+    "name": "Slay bats",
+    "description": "Kill 10 <color_magenta>vampire bats</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER_SPEC",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 200000,
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERSEEKER_quest1",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Go to a forgotten burial site",
-    "description": " Travel to a <color_light_blue>burial site</color> then talk to the seeker.",
+    "description": " Travel to a <color_light_blue>burial site</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_GO_TO_TYPE",
     "difficulty": 1,
     "value": 200000,
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERSEEKER_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Go to the wasteland outskirts",
-    "description": "Along with the seeker, travel to the <color_light_blue>wasteland outskirts</color>. Talk to them again after reaching the destination.",
+    "description": "Along with the seeker, travel to the <color_light_blue>wasteland outskirts</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_GO_TO_TYPE",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 400000,
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_WS2_quest1",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Recruit Radio Specialist",
-    "description": "Ask the <color_yellow>Radio Specialist</color> to join, then talk to the guard after they did.",
+    "description": "Ask the <color_yellow>Radio Specialist</color> to join.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_RECRUIT_NPC",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_WS2_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Slay the succumbed vampire",
-    "description": "Kill the <color_magenta>succumbed vampire</color> then talk to the guard.\n<color_red>Going unprepared is a death trap!</color>",
+    "description": "Kill the <color_magenta>succumbed vampire</color>.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER",
     "difficulty": 10,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_WS2_quest3",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Destroy the vampirus",
-    "description": "With the help of the <color_yellow>seeker</color>, locate and destroy the <color_light_blue>vampirus</color>, the place where <color_magenta>infected vampires</color> gather.\n<color_red>Going unprepared is a death trap!</color>",
+    "description": "With the help of the <color_yellow>seeker</color>, locate and destroy the <color_light_blue>vampirus</color>, the place where <color_magenta>infected vampires</color> gather.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_CONDITION",
     "goal_condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2vampirusdone" },
     "difficulty": 10,