Many updates to get this mod working properly. See the readme.

1 files changed, 24 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
index 53c1f80..82886a8 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_mission.json
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest1",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Collect 30 blood",
-    "description": "Collect <color_light_red>30 human blood</color> then bring it to the commando.",
+    "description": "Collect 7.5 L of <color_light_red>human blood</color> then bring it to the commando.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 0,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Collect 15 small leech teeth",
-    "description": "Gather <color_light_red>15 small leech teeth</color> and give them to the commando. They are rarely dropped by <color_magenta>leeches</color> that lives in the <color_light_blue>swamp</color>.",
+    "description": "Gather 15 <color_light_red>small leech teeth</color> and give them to the commando.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 200000,
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     "has_generic_rewards": false,
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "I want you to slay something...",
-      "offer": "Ofcourse you know about the bloodsucking pests on the swamp, we hate those parasites squirming for blood to live. Hand over 15 of their teeth as a proof to succeed this trial.",
+      "offer": "Of course you know about the bloodsucking pests on the swamp, we hate those parasites squirming for blood to live. Hand over 15 of their teeth as a proof to succeed this trial.",
       "accepted": "Slay them in any way you want.",
       "rejected": "It's just okay.",
       "advice": "They are blind, and depends on what they hear or smell.",
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERCOMMANDO_quest3",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Take the blood sac from the giant \"Thing\"",
-    "description": "Get the <color_light_red>blood sac</color> by slaying the <color_magenta>giant \"Thing\"</color>, then deliver it to the commando.\n<color_red>Going unprepared is a death trap!</color>.",
+    "description": "Slay the <color_magenta>giant \"Thing\"</color>, then deliver the <color_light_red>blood sac</color> to the commando.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 10,
     "value": 300000,
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
       "offer": "There is a peculiar cave with vast blood residue in it and I think its their gathering place. This giant \"thing\" on the depths, you'll need to bring it down as my command.",
       "accepted": "Bring its blood sac, that would be a nice prize taking it down and as a proof of succeeding this test.",
       "rejected": "Gather your courage first.",
-      "advice": "It is blind and very slow, slower than a human snail, but it'll devour you and causes deadly injuries getting near it... Now get going!",
+      "advice": "It is blind and very slow, slower than a human snail, but it'll either devour you and cause deadly injuries if you get near it... Now get going!",
       "inquire": "Killed it?",
       "success": "Damn kid, that's the mess you wanted to get. And you are still alive after that!",
       "success_lie": "Well, thank you. *smirks*",
@@ -117,12 +117,12 @@
     "followup": "VAMP_LONELY_quest2",
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "I want you for this errand.",
-      "offer": "Did you know we have been using blood substitutes for decades? Well, that's a good thing for us. Now, I want you to collect a few human blood, either yours or not... 15, I suppose that will satisfy my pleasure for that taste once again.",
+      "offer": "Did you know we have been using blood substitutes for decades? That turned out to be a good decision for us considering the current situation. Now, I want you to collect some human blood, either yours or not... a gallon, I suppose that will satisfy my pleasure for the taste once again.",
       "accepted": "You better do this. Sinking my fangs onto your flimsy neck is indeed fatal.",
       "rejected": "Talk to me again later if you want to help me.",
       "advice": "Murder someone if you are desperate to collect them.",
       "inquire": "Did you get my drinks?",
-      "success": "Fascinating work, mortal.",
+      "success": "Fantastic work, mortal.",
       "success_lie": "Well, thank you. *smirks*",
       "failure": "*smilesatyou*",
       "failure_lie_": "Do not lie!"
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Take down 10 elder zombies",
-    "description": "Slay <color_magenta>10 elder zombies</color> then talk to the vampire after completion.  <color_magenta>Elder zombies</color> are depicted to their stone-like, compact blood and are rarely seen in the <color_light_blue>graveyards</color>.",
+    "description": "Slay <color_magenta>10 elder zombies</color> then talk to the vampire after completion.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER_SPEC",
     "difficulty": 3,
     "value": 300000,
@@ -143,12 +143,12 @@
     "followup": "VAMP_LONELY_quest3",
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "This is a little harder...",
-      "offer": "The gravestone in this crypt were built long ago, and the dead bodies has been buried here since before I reside here. Surprisingly, they were resurrected with this odd \"magic\". I want you to take 10 of them down and let their hollow vessel for an eternal rest.",
+      "offer": "The gravestones in this crypt were built long ago, and the dead bodies had been buried since before I resided here. Surprisingly, they were resurrected with some form of \"magic\". I want you to take 10 of them down and give the hollow vessels for an eternal rest.",
       "accepted": "Good. Now go outside and look for them.",
       "rejected": "Come back later.",
-      "advice": "Their blood has calcified into a shell, and it is distinctive to their appearance.",
+      "advice": "Their blood has calcified into a shell from their age, making them distinctive in appearance. Don't expect to find them around any modern era cemetary.",
       "inquire": "Now?",
-      "success": "I know you can do it...",
+      "success": "I knew you can do it...",
       "success_lie": "Well, thank you. *smirks*",
       "failure": "*glares*",
       "failure_lie_": "Do not lie!"
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_LONELY_quest3",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Bring a bloodrune",
-    "description": "Get a <color_light_red>bloodrune</color> then deliver it to the vampire.",
+    "description": "Obtain a <color_light_red>bloodrune</color> then deliver it to the vampire.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 5,
     "value": 400000,
@@ -177,12 +177,12 @@
     },
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "This is a bit hard for you. You still want to try?",
-      "offer": "Bloodrune... The vampire's eternal soul. Merely a fact that few of us night creatures turn into an object upon death, yet most resists to that point.\nIn the dark days, bloodrunes are set in a pedestal by elder civilizations, and said that their \"god\" will accept it as a praise, which is not true. Get this rune for me, to honor its soul in a way we normally do.",
+      "offer": "Bloodrune... The vampire's eternal soul. Few of us night creatures crystalize into one upon death, though most vampires survive long enough for it to be a possiblity.\nIn the dark days, bloodrunes were set in pedestal by past civilizations, and said that their \"god\" would accept it as an offering, which is not true. Get this rune for me, so I can honor that soul in the proper way.",
       "accepted": "Good.",
       "rejected": "Just do it later on.",
-      "advice": "A vampire's death is a big success to those elderly jerks. Well, it is their belief that can't be bothered in any way.",
+      "advice": "A vampire's death is an event to celebrate to those ancient jerks. Well, it is their belief that can't be bothered in any way.",
       "inquire": "Got it?",
-      "success": "I thank you for this rune.\n*Shatters it by hand*\n",
+      "success": "I thank you for this bloodrune.\n*Shatters it by hand*\n",
       "success_lie": "Just thanks...",
       "failure": "*smirks*",
       "failure_lie": "I shouldn't believe you with this."
@@ -205,12 +205,12 @@
     "origins": [ "ORIGIN_SECONDARY" ],
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "This is the last job, you want to do it?",
-      "offer": "Since you've been helping me for a while, I will need you to travel with me to the vampire cove. Being isolated for centuries is a great experience, but seeing a living community of my kind alleviates my frozen body the most.",
+      "offer": "Since you've been helping me for a while, I will need you to travel with me to the vampire cove. Being isolated for centuries is a rewarding experience, but seeing a living community of my kind should rejuvinate my frozen body the most.",
       "accepted": "Good, those tests proved yourself a good descendant. As a reward, I'll protect you along the way.",
       "rejected": "Just okay, get back later...",
-      "advice": "This may be a long journey. You know I'm a night creature, so you'll have to take care of me in daytime.",
+      "advice": "This may be a long journey. You know I'm a night creature, so you'll have to shield me during in daytime.",
       "inquire": "What?",
-      "success": "I see my kindred seems alright. Well, it does matter to me, and you've been the key to this. Thank you, descendant.",
+      "success": "I see my kindred are doing well. This does matter to me, and you've been the key to this. Thank you, descendant.",
       "success_lie": "Just thanks...",
       "failure": "*smirks*",
       "failure_lie": "I better have killed you, mortal."
@@ -219,8 +219,8 @@
   {
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERTRADER_quest",
     "type": "mission_definition",
-    "name": "Get 2 Corrupt Bloodrune Stone",
-    "description": "Get the <color_light_red>2 corrupted bloodrune stones</color> that are dropped by killing the <color_magenta>infected vampires</color> then deliver them to the trader.",
+    "name": "Kill the Infected Vampires",
+    "description": "Kill the <color_magenta>infected vampires</color>, then return their <color_light_red>corrupted bloodrune stones</color> to the trader.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_NULL",
     "difficulty": 3,
     "value": 100000,
@@ -234,10 +234,10 @@
     "followup": "VAMP_UNDERTRADER_quest2",
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "Well, actually we have a problem...",
-      "offer": "Our kin isn't a target of diseases, but those 2 vampires at the back, they really look bad and start raging on its own, so we cage them at early state... Never knew the magic was that strong enough to kill EVEN us. I want you to end the sick vampires as your task and get their corrupted bloodrune. We know we can dispose them easily, but our beliefs prevent us from killing our own kind.",
+      "offer": "Our kin isn't normally vulnerable to disease, but those 2 vampires at the back, they really look bad and have become feral, so we caged them as soon as it was clear they had contracted something... Never knew that magic was strong enough to kill EVEN us. I want you to pur an end to the sick vampires and get their corrupted bloodrunes. We know we can dispose them easily, but our traditions forbid us from killing our own kind.",
       "accepted": "Thank you, now go.",
       "rejected": "You need to do that later.",
-      "advice": "Serious pain you'll get from breaking into their cage.",
+      "advice": "Expect some serious pain after you enter their cage.",
       "inquire": "What happened there?",
       "success": "Great, mortal. This oozing bloodrune will now meet its place... Or not at all.",
       "success_lie": "Well, thank you. *smirks*",
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
     "id": "VAMP_UNDERTRADER_quest2",
     "type": "mission_definition",
     "name": "Slay 10 bats",
-    "description": "Kill <color_magenta>10 bats</color> then talk to the trader after completion. <color_magenta>Bats</color> are commonly seen at <color_gray>nighttime</color> or inside a <color_light_blue>cave</color>.",
+    "description": "Kill 10 <color_magenta>vampire bats</color>, then talk to the trader after completion.",
     "goal": "MGOAL_KILL_MONSTER_SPEC",
     "difficulty": 2,
     "value": 200000,
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
     "end": { "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "undertradertestsdone" } },
     "dialogue": {
       "describe": "We do appreciate your assistance with our needs.",
-      "offer": "Vampire bats became literal bloodsuckers these passing days and I want you to hunt down 10 of these vermins. We've been swarmed by these creatures lately but gladly we managed to shove them away.",
+      "offer": "Vampire bats have become a threat to anything filled with these days, even going so far as to prey on vampires. I want you to reduce their numbers by hunting down 10 of these vermin.",
       "accepted": "Good. Come back anytime you want.",
       "rejected": "I guess you're afraid of bats...",
       "advice": "Bats are nocturnal, and tends to live in dark places like caves.",