1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
index f370007..47451ec 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     "responses": [
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohere" } },
-        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?.",
+        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_here"
       },
       {
@@ -15,45 +15,45 @@
             { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohereagain" } }
           ]
         },
-        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?.",
+        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_hereagain"
       },
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedjoblol" } },
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedjoblol" },
-        "text": "Any job to offer?.",
+        "text": "Any jobs to offer?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_joblol"
       },
-      { "effect": "start_trade", "text": "I want your junk...", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk" },
+      { "effect": "start_trade", "text": "Let me see what you have to trade.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk" },
       { "text": "Bye.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "Just a silly guy collecting garbage outside, somewhere far from those frenzied walkers. There are times my job put me into risks, so I only bring few of them back here.",
+    "dynamic_line": "Just a silly guy collecting garbage outside, somewhere far from those frenzied walkers. There are many times my hobby has put me at risk, so I can only safely bring a few of the items I find back here.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_here",
     "responses": [ { "text": "And... How's the living here?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_there" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "Peaceful as always. But you see, life's been easier living along with these vampires. They offer us protection from all sorts of threat while us humans do the usual chores outside.",
+    "dynamic_line": "Peaceful as always. But you see, life has been easier working together with these vampires. They offer us protection from all sorts of threats, while us humans do the usual chores outside.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_there",
     "responses": [
       {
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohere" },
-        "text": "I guess they're friendly afterall...",
+        "text": "I guess they're friendly after all.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk"
       }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "I have said my words clearly, or you like to repeat one's answer for fun?",
+    "dynamic_line": "I have said my words clearly, or do you like to repeat your answers just for fun?",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_hereagain",
     "responses": [
       {
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohereagain" },
-        "text": "Sorry about that...",
+        "text": "Sorry about that.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk"
       }
     ],