Clean up the Lone Vampire background story

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/Backgrounds/lonevamp_s1.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/Backgrounds/lonevamp_s1.json
index d0c283e..ac4a4e7 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/Backgrounds/lonevamp_s1.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/Backgrounds/lonevamp_s1.json
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "It was my time to hunt down a prey. Moon's in its peak, everything's peaceful... But all crumbles so quickly that night, after sighting this woman at the forest trail, weeping, tending to her grievous wound.",
+    "dynamic_line": "It was my time to hunt for prey. Moon's in its peak, everything's peaceful... But all crumbled away so quickly that night, after sighting this woman on a forest trail, weeping, tending to her grievous wound.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "What about her?.",
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_CURIOUS",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "From my observation, she's at her mid-life, fully dressed with her bag full of supplies.",
+    "dynamic_line": "From my observation, she was at her mid-life, fully dressed and her bag full of supplies.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "What about her wound?",
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_WOUND",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "I did not come closer, but I took a deeper look. From what I have seen, there's this gooey black substance, pumping slowly into her.",
+    "dynamic_line": "I did not come closer, but I took a deeper look. From what I have seen, there was this gooey black substance, pumping slowly into her.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "What about her?.",
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_WHAT",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "No. But in my belief, its a parasite that sucks life from its host.",
+    "dynamic_line": "No. But in my belief, it is a parasite that sucks the life from its host.",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "So, what did you do after that?", "topic": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_NEXT" },
       { "text": "<done_conversation_section>", "topic": "TALK_FRIEND" },
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_NEXT",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "I stalked her through the trail. My curiosity kept my thirst aside for some moment, 'till she suddenly spasms to the ground. I approach her and inspect his vitality, finding out she's dead. Her veins turn black and her eyes oozing with goo. I tried to close her eyelids, but then she immediately bit my <swear> hand!",
+    "dynamic_line": "I stalked her through the trail. My curiosity kept my thirst aside for some time, 'till she suddenly spasmed to the ground. I approached her and inspected her vitality, discovering she's dead. Her veins has turned black and her eyes oozed with goo. I tried to close her eyelids, but then she lurched at me and bit my hand!",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "Woah, that is horrifying!", "topic": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_DONE" },
       { "text": "<done_conversation_section>", "topic": "TALK_FRIEND" },
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
   {
     "id": "BGSS_LONEVAMP_S1_DONE",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "In quick response, I slam her <swear> head against the ground and explodes into a mass of gore!\nWell, fortunately her bite isn't that deep, but I swear I'll <swear> break their skulls before I get too close to them again!",
+    "dynamic_line": "In quick response, I slammed her head against the ground and it burst into a mass of gore!\nWell, fortunately her bite wasn't that deep, but I swear I'll break their skulls before I get too close to them again!",
     "responses": [ { "text": "<end_talking>", "topic": "TALK_DONE" } ]
   }
 ]