Clean up the wasteland npc dialogues

Add vampire replies to wasteland dialogues

7 files changed, 85 insertions, 69 deletions

diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
index f370007..47451ec 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wjs_responses.json
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     "responses": [
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohere" } },
-        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?.",
+        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_here"
       },
       {
@@ -15,45 +15,45 @@
             { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohereagain" } }
           ]
         },
-        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?.",
+        "text": "Who and what are you doing here?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_hereagain"
       },
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "npc_has_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedjoblol" } },
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedjoblol" },
-        "text": "Any job to offer?.",
+        "text": "Any jobs to offer?",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_joblol"
       },
-      { "effect": "start_trade", "text": "I want your junk...", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk" },
+      { "effect": "start_trade", "text": "Let me see what you have to trade.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk" },
       { "text": "Bye.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "Just a silly guy collecting garbage outside, somewhere far from those frenzied walkers. There are times my job put me into risks, so I only bring few of them back here.",
+    "dynamic_line": "Just a silly guy collecting garbage outside, somewhere far from those frenzied walkers. There are many times my hobby has put me at risk, so I can only safely bring a few of the items I find back here.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_here",
     "responses": [ { "text": "And... How's the living here?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_there" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "Peaceful as always. But you see, life's been easier living along with these vampires. They offer us protection from all sorts of threat while us humans do the usual chores outside.",
+    "dynamic_line": "Peaceful as always. But you see, life has been easier working together with these vampires. They offer us protection from all sorts of threats, while us humans do the usual chores outside.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_there",
     "responses": [
       {
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohere" },
-        "text": "I guess they're friendly afterall...",
+        "text": "I guess they're friendly after all.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk"
       }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "I have said my words clearly, or you like to repeat one's answer for fun?",
+    "dynamic_line": "I have said my words clearly, or do you like to repeat your answers just for fun?",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_hereagain",
     "responses": [
       {
         "effect": { "npc_add_trait": "wastehumanjshoptalkedtohereagain" },
-        "text": "Sorry about that...",
+        "text": "Sorry about that.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_JUNKSHOP_maintalk"
       }
     ],
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr1_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr1_responses.json
index 178394f..e6020c3 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr1_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr1_responses.json
@@ -3,23 +3,23 @@
     "dynamic_line": "Hey, what's up?",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_maintalk",
     "responses": [
-      { "text": "What's happening here?.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_here" },
-      { "text": "Want to come along?.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_come" },
+      { "text": "What's happening here?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_here" },
+      { "text": "Want to come along?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_come" },
       { "text": "Bye.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "As usual. Repairs, gatherings, carnages... ",
+    "dynamic_line": "As usual. Repairs, gatherings, carnage... ",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_here",
     "responses": [ { "text": "Oh, okay...", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_maintalk" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
     "dynamic_line": {
-      "no": "I don't say I don't trust you, but no.",
+      "no": "I won't say I don't trust you, but no.",
       "u_has_trait": "wastehumanassociatemark",
-      "yes": "Are you sure about this? I could be a burden in your travels?"
+      "yes": "Are you sure about this? I won't become a burden in your travels?"
     },
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_come",
     "responses": [
@@ -36,12 +36,12 @@
       },
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wastehumanassociatemark" } },
-        "text": "Okay...",
+        "text": "Okay then.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND1_maintalk"
       },
       {
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wastehumanassociatemark" } },
-        "text": "Bye then...",
+        "text": "Bye.",
         "topic": "TALK_DONE"
       }
     ],
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr2_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr2_responses.json
index 667733c..691280f 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr2_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wr2_responses.json
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 [
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "Hello outsider",
+    "dynamic_line": "Hello outsider.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_talkme",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "I want to talk.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_maintalk" },
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "I guard here, most of the time. But sometimes I do few things other than that.",
+    "dynamic_line": "I guard the wasteland here most of the time. But sometimes I do a few things other than that.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_here",
     "responses": [ { "text": "Got it.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_maintalk" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   {
     "dynamic_line": "Nope.",
     "id": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_job",
-    "responses": [ { "text": "You said it...", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_maintalk" } ],
+    "responses": [ { "text": "You said it.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_WASTELAND2_maintalk" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   }
 ]
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wrs_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wrs_responses.json
index 8736bb3..644f9e5 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wrs_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/h_wrs_responses.json
@@ -13,11 +13,11 @@
         },
         "no": "Are you going to bring me there now?"
       },
-      "no": "Well hi there? Its been a while since I see a living human walking in this damned world!"
+      "no": "Well hi there? Its been a while since I have seem a living human walking in this damned world!"
     },
     "responses": [
       {
-        "text": "We need your help in operating a radio tower.",
+        "text": "We need your help with operating a radio tower.",
         "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_RS_talked",
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wrsgo" } }
       },
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     "responses": [
       { "text": "To ease the job?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_RS_nvm" },
       { "text": "Increase the efficiency of our radio?", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_RS_nvm" },
-      { "text": "Its a complicated thing for us...", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_RS_nvm" }
+      { "text": "It is a complicated thing for us.", "topic": "TALK_HUMAN_RS_nvm" }
     ]
   },
   {
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_vgs_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_vgs_responses.json
index cb7468f..99dff13 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_vgs_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_vgs_responses.json
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_talkme",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "Mortal! Struggling to live?",
+    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP", "yes": "Vampire! Struggling with unlife?", "no": "Mortal! Struggling to live?" },
     "responses": [ { "text": "Yes, and true.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_maintalk" } ]
   },
   {
@@ -19,20 +19,20 @@
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_whoisme",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "I am the gun trader here... If you're not interested with my trades, just go outside.",
-    "responses": [ { "text": "Thanks for your info.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_maintalk" } ]
+    "dynamic_line": "I am the gun trader here... If you're not interested in my wares, just leave.",
+    "responses": [ { "text": "Thanks for the info.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_maintalk" } ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_gunthere",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "These are reserved from decades 'till now. Since there's no gunsmith on our side, we only got few of them.",
+    "dynamic_line": "These are reserves made decades ago. Since there's no gunsmith on our side anymore, we've only got few of them.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "Can I get something from you for free?",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_freegun",
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wvgssupp" } }
       },
-      { "text": "Sound hard-to-get.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_maintalk" }
+      { "text": "They sound hard to get.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_maintalk" }
     ]
   },
   {
@@ -64,13 +64,16 @@
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_givesupplies",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "The supplies that were stocked in here are some spare draw kits, a bag and blood powders. Will you take them?",
-    "note": "One time free supplies which are not that valuable, but atleast you've been given with something as rewards...",
+    "dynamic_line": "The supplies that were stocked in here contained some spare blood draw kits, a bag and blood powders. Will you take them?",
+    "note": "One time free supplies which are not valuable, but at least you've been given with something as a reward.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "But he told me to get some guns from you?",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_gun",
-        "condition": { "and": [ { "u_is_wearing": "blood_cring" }, { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wvgsgun" } } ] }
+        "condition": { "and": [
+          { "u_is_wearing": "blood_cring" },
+          { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wvgsgun" } }
+        ] }
       },
       {
         "text": "But he told me to get some guns from you?",
@@ -93,7 +96,7 @@
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_GUNSHOP_gun",
     "type": "talk_topic",
     "note": "Totally a trashy handgun with very low damage output.",
-    "dynamic_line": "Umm... I could give you the oldest prototype of vampiric guns I got here:\nThe blood slinger.",
+    "dynamic_line": "I could give you the oldest prototype of vampiric guns I got here:\nThe blood slinger.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "Seems legit. I'll take it!",
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg1_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg1_responses.json
index 982f00d..be52b40 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg1_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg1_responses.json
@@ -1,6 +1,11 @@
 [
+
   {
-    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1meet", "yes": "What is it, mortal?", "no": "You've come a long way, mortal." },
+    "dynamic_line": {
+      "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP",
+      "yes": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1meet", "yes": "What is it, vampire?", "no": "You've come a long way, vampire." },
+      "no": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1meet", "yes": "What is it, mortal?", "no": "You've come a long way, mortal." }
+    },
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_talkme",
     "responses": [
       {
@@ -36,7 +41,7 @@
       {
         "truefalsetext": {
           "condition": { "u_has_trait": "commandovampmark" },
-          "true": "The commando has sent me to this place.",
+          "true": "The commander sent me to this place.",
           "false": "You know a place like this?"
         },
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_know",
@@ -44,7 +49,7 @@
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1know" } }
       },
       {
-        "text": "You need a volunteer for jobs?",
+        "text": "You need a volunteer for any jobs?",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_job",
         "condition": { "and": [ { "u_has_trait": "wsg1here" }, { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1hire" } } ] }
       },
@@ -54,12 +59,12 @@
         "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg1met" },
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1met" } }
       },
-      { "text": "Nevermind. I'll be going now...", "topic": "TALK_DONE", "condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1met" } }
+      { "text": "Nevermind. I'll be going now.", "topic": "TALK_DONE", "condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1met" } }
     ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
   },
   {
-    "dynamic_line": "You're in the sanctuary for both humans and vampires, the wasteland outskirts. Here, we protect each other from savage entities and serves as an outpost for those luckily survived ones.",
+    "dynamic_line": "You're in the sanctuary for both humans and vampires, the wasteland outskirts. Here, we protect each other from the savage entities outside and serve as an outpost for those lucky few that survived.",
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_here",
     "responses": [ { "text": "Okay, thanks for the info.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_maintalk" } ],
     "type": "talk_topic"
@@ -102,7 +107,7 @@
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_job",
     "responses": [
       {
-        "text": "The commando has sent me here.",
+        "text": "The commander sent me here.",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD1_know",
         "condition": { "and": [ { "u_has_trait": "commandovampmark" }, { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1hire" } } ] }
       },
diff --git a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg2_responses.json b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg2_responses.json
index 8228d06..e08dac0 100644
--- a/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg2_responses.json
+++ b/vamp_stuff/Modification_Files/NPC/v_npc_responds/Wastelands_Outskirts/v_wg2_responses.json
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
       {
         "truefalsetext": {
           "condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2meet" },
-          "true": "I want to talk with you...",
+          "true": "I want to talk with you.",
           "false": "Let's talk for a moment."
         },
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly",
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
     "type": "talk_topic",
     "dynamic_line": {
       "u_has_trait": "commandovampmark",
-      "yes": { "u_has_trait": "undertradervampmark", "yes": "I guess you're important. What is it?", "no": "No..." },
+      "yes": { "u_has_trait": "undertradervampmark", "yes": "I guess you're important. What is it?", "no": "No." },
       "no": "No!"
     },
     "responses": [
@@ -91,15 +91,15 @@
       },
       { "condition": "has_assigned_mission", "text": "About that job...", "topic": "TALK_MISSION_INQUIRE" },
       { "text": "Something I need to do?", "topic": "TALK_MISSION_LIST", "condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2hired" } },
-      { "text": "I better get going...", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
+      { "text": "I better get going.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_whereisme",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "You're at the wasteland outskirts, now move, mortal.",
+    "dynamic_line": { "yes": "You're at the wasteland outskirts, now move, mortal.", "no": "You're at the wasteland outskirts, now move, vampire." },
     "responses": [
-      { "text": "Wait. I want to know more about the places you know...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_morelocs" },
+      { "text": "Wait. I want to know more about the area.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_morelocs" },
       { "text": "Okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" },
       { "text": "Okay, I'll move.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ]
@@ -110,17 +110,17 @@
     "dynamic_line": "Like what?",
     "responses": [
       {
-        "text": "About HIM's location?",
+        "text": "About HIS location?",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_himloc",
         "condition": { "u_has_trait": "undertradertalkedhim" }
       },
-      { "text": "Actually, nevermind...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Actually, nevermind.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_himloc",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "I know you've been told its a deep secret, but why do you mind about our master?",
+    "dynamic_line": "I know you've been told it is a deep secret, but why do you want to know the location of our master?",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "I'd like to meet HIM.",
@@ -140,13 +140,15 @@
         "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg2himact" },
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2himact" } }
       },
-      { "text": "Forget it...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Forget it.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_seehimlol",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "In which will never happen to a human.",
+    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP",
+        "yes": "That which will never happen to a neonate.",
+        "no": "That which will never happen to a human." },
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "HE looks questionable.",
@@ -161,7 +163,7 @@
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2himact" } }
       },
       {
-        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything...",
+        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything.",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_secrethim",
         "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg2himsecret" },
         "condition": {
@@ -173,13 +175,13 @@
           ]
         }
       },
-      { "text": " That sucks...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "That sucks.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_lookhimlol",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "I know. HE's full of mysteries even me can't talk about.",
+    "dynamic_line": "I know. HE's full of mysteries even I can't talk about.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "I'd like to meet HIM.",
@@ -194,7 +196,7 @@
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2himact" } }
       },
       {
-        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything...",
+        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything.",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_secrethim",
         "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg2himsecret" },
         "condition": {
@@ -206,13 +208,15 @@
           ]
         }
       },
-      { "text": "Okay...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_actshimlol",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "Trust me, human, HIS movements are for the good cause.",
+    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP",
+        "yes": "Trust me, vampire, HIS movements are for the good cause",
+        "no": "Trust me, human, HIS movements are for the good cause." },
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "I'd like to meet HIM.",
@@ -227,7 +231,7 @@
         "condition": { "not": { "u_has_trait": "wsg2himlook" } }
       },
       {
-        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything...",
+        "text": "I guess I've talked about everything.",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_secrethim",
         "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg2himsecret" },
         "condition": {
@@ -239,35 +243,37 @@
           ]
         }
       },
-      { "text": "Oh, okay then...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Oh, okay then.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_secrethim",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "Don't worry, mortal. Eventually, you'll meet someone to quench your thirst for deeper answers.",
+    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP",
+        "yes": "Don't worry, vampire. Eventually, you'll meet someone to quench your thirst for deeper answers.",
+        "no": "Don't worry, mortal. Eventually, you'll meet someone to quench your thirst for deeper answers." },
     "responses": [
-      { "text": "Uhh, okay...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" },
-      { "text": "Uhh, okay... I'll expect that.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
+      { "text": "Uhh, okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" },
+      { "text": "Uhh, okay. I'll expect that.", "topic": "TALK_DONE" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_whoisyou",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "Nah, I'm just a guard here doing my job. If you want to know more, seek the guard in the kitchen.",
+    "dynamic_line": "Nah, I'm just a guard here doing my job. If you want to know more, speak with the guard in the kitchen.",
     "responses": [
       {
         "text": "He told me to help you with something.",
         "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_wuthelp",
         "condition": { "u_has_trait": "wsg1hire" }
       },
-      { "text": "Okay, I'm going...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Okay, I'm going.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_wuthelp",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "So you're interested in helping us out with our problems... But I don't want to get you in trouble.",
+    "dynamic_line": "So you're interested in helping us out with our problems. But I don't want to get you in trouble.",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "I'll take the risk!", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_helpaccept", "effect": { "u_add_trait": "wsg2hired" } },
       { "text": "Forget it, I'm out of that!", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
@@ -276,35 +282,37 @@
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_helpaccept",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "If you insist...",
+    "dynamic_line": "If you insist.",
     "responses": [ { "text": "Okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" } ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_youliving",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "We've got some cows here as our food source and a water nearby for humans to quench their thirst.",
+    "dynamic_line": "We've got some cows here as our food source and a spring nearby for humans to quench their thirst.",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "I mean what are you vampires drinking?", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_drunk" },
       { "text": "Cows? Where'd you get them?", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_moo" },
-      { "text": "Okay...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_drunk",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "Blood, ofcourse! We drink blood from the cows as our substitute to human's. Don't worry about the refugees here, we tend to protect them as ordered.",
+    "dynamic_line": { "u_has_trait": "THRESH_VAMP",
+        "yes": "Blood, of course! We drink blood from the cows as our substitute to humans. Don't drink from the refugees here, we are under orders to protect them.",
+        "no": "Blood, of course! We drink blood from the cows as our substitute to humans. Don't worry about the refugees here, we are under orders to protect them." },
     "responses": [
-      { "text": "Cows? Where'd you get them?", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_moo" },
-      { "text": "Oh, okay...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Cows? Where'd you get those?", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_moo" },
+      { "text": "Oh, okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   },
   {
     "id": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_moo",
     "type": "talk_topic",
-    "dynamic_line": "We herd them from the wilderness. We don't know if they came from the nearest farm, but certainly they are free from infection.",
+    "dynamic_line": "We herded them from the wilderness. We don't know if they escaped from a nearby farm, but they are free from infection.",
     "responses": [
       { "text": "I mean what are you vampires drinking?", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_drunk" },
-      { "text": "Oh, okay...", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
+      { "text": "Oh, okay.", "topic": "TALK_VAMP_WASTEGUARD2_ohrelly" }
     ]
   }
 ]